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不可错过的兰姆

不可错过的兰姆



江南雪儿



查尔斯·兰姆——我是先知道他的动人故事后,再关注他文字的。

那一年,他目睹一个年轻女士将年老女士杀死,而她们分别是她的姐姐和母亲,从此,他的人生为此改变,他担当起抚养患精神病姐姐的重任,终身未娶,尽管他还有个哥哥。他的散文被列入世界经典文库,我国现代的丰子恺、林语堂等人都受过他文风影响。

应该说,我阅读他文章是无声的(我喜欢在听MP3的背景下读书),他的文章我才刚刚阅读,尽管以前在网络或杂志上浏览过。有三点感想陈述:



其一:翻译的质量。这个译者我很抱歉,我读过王道乾翻译的杜拉斯、韩少功翻译的佩索阿、还有黄灿然等人翻译的卡尔维诺以及茨威格等译文,我的身心是充沛的,阅读是享受是参与,好的译作领悟了作品精髓,你读它,有一种气脉、一种律动、一种吸纳,而我在路途中阅读了兰姆的《伊利亚随笔》前几篇,我的评价是:拗口别扭,读不下去。也许,我要习惯,我将慢慢适应,希望它不会落得和那本《瓦尔登湖》一样,因为不是徐迟翻译的。



其二:文本的开拓。这是兰姆的关键,兰姆散文的最大特点不是在场,不是写我,他写追忆、写非我、写虚构、写小说式的文本。在一篇短文里,他和你云山雾海绕一圈之后,然后笔锋逆转,着墨于某人某事。他不写我,他写非我。这是与中国散文意旨相悖的,同时,也让我欣喜若狂。我从来就不受框架不受禁锢,我写的我是非我是他我。关于这点,以后在实验中阐释。



其三:饶有趣味的是,他和佩索阿一样,都是职员都是会计。读过佩文后我难忘他对里斯本和道拉多雷斯大街的早市雾霭的刻画,而兰姆呢,他从不写景,他的散文就是写人,犹如小说,让我联想到博尔赫斯,他的小说一律都是陈述,可以当作散文阅读。由此,我感觉自己在被打通,文界、文限的拓展。他们两人都注重细节,做到了精细、精微、精美。这是我需要的养分。



要想写出好散文,不可错过兰姆。

Prologue to Sirach便西拉智训序

Prologue to Sirach
[A Prologue made by an uncertain Author] This Jesus was the son of Sirach, and grandchild to Jesus of the same name with him: this man therefore lived in the latter times, after the people had been led away captive, and called home a again, and almost after all the prophets. Now his grandfather Jesus, as he himself witnesseth, was a man of great diligence and wisdom among the Hebrews, who did not only gather the grave and short sentences of wise men, that had been before him, but himself also uttered some of his own, full of much understanding and wisdom. When as therefore the first Jesus died, leaving this book almost perfected, Sirach his son receiving it after him left it to his own son Jesus, who, having gotten it into his hands, compiled it all orderly into one volume, and called it Wisdom, intituling it both by his own name, his father's name, and his grandfather's; alluring the hearer by the very name of Wisdom to have a greater love to the study of this book. It containeth therefore wise sayings, dark sentences, and parables, and certain particular ancient godly stories of men that pleased God; also his prayer and song; moreover, what benefits God had vouchsafed his people, and what plagues he had heaped upon their enemies. This Jesus did imitate Solomon, and was no less famous for wisdom and learning, both being indeed a man of great learning, and so reputed also.

[The Prologue of the Wisdom of Jesus the Son of Sirach.]
Whereas many and great things have been delivered unto us by the law and the prophets, and by others that have followed their steps, for the which things Israel ought to be commended for learning and wisdom; and whereof not only the readers must needs become skilful themselves, but also they that desire to learn be able to profit them which are without, both by speaking and writing: my grandfather Jesus, when he had much given himself to the reading of the law, and the prophets, and other books of our fathers, and had gotten therein good judgment, was drawn on also himself to write something pertaining to learning and wisdom; to the intent that those which are desirous to learn, and are addicted to these things, might profit much more in living according to the law. Wherefore let me intreat you to read it with favour and attention, and to pardon us, wherein we may seem to come short of some words, which we have laboured to interpret. For the same things uttered in Hebrew, and translated into another tongue, have not the same force in them: and not only these things, but the law itself, and the prophets, and the rest of the books, have no small difference, when they are spoken in their own language. For in the eight and thirtieth year coming into Egypt, when Euergetes was king, and continuing there some time, I found a book of no small learning: therefore I thought it most necessary for me to bestow some diligence and travail to interpret it; using great watchfulness and skill in that space to bring the book to an end, and set it forth for them also, which in a strange country are willing to learn, being prepared before in manners to live after the law.

先知和後来的作家们,给我们留下了一笔宝贵的教义财富,
我们应当赞美以色列人,是他们给我们提供了教导和智慧。

如果读者们只满足於本人猎取知识,那是远远不够的。
每个珍视学问的人都应该以自己的演说和写作帮助他人。

这就是我祖父耶稣热衷於阅读律法书。先知书和祖先其它著作的
原因之所在。

当他掌握这些知识以後,他便从事於自传的著述,为的是和其他
人共同分享。

他的智慧和学问,因此,凡是分享到他对学问之爱的人,也应该
以此书为有益之作,

并且尽一切可能地按照律法生活。那就让我奉劝你们吧。以一颗
坦诚的心,

仔细阅读这本书。请耐心读下去,尽管我全力以赴,某些短语
我还是没有翻译好。

原本用希伯来文写成的作品,每当把它翻译成另一种文字的时候,
往往找不到确切的同样意思的词句。

这话不仅适用於本书,即使是律法书。先知书以及其他著作的
翻译,也都是如此。翻译和原文不可能分毫不差。

我於忧尔盖茨王在位第三十八年来到埃及,在那儿呆了一
段时间。在这期间,

我有机会进行广泛的研究,颇感翻译此书之必要。我要竭尽全力与
技巧译成此书,

俾使其有益於所有那些好学而又遵行摩西律法的侨居者。